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Hi, my name is Nicole
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 | In Love with my Kidnapper... |
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 5 with 2 vote(s)
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| Created: 2009-04-16 23:52:26 |
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If you read the original "I'm in love with my kidnapper" good for you. It's been maybe 3 yrs since i wrote that series, and i read them over and realized how much i sucked. SO i'm back, and i'm going to edit the series and continue from where i ended.
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August 25
"Dear Diary,
It's me again! Today after school is Jessie's birthday! I can't wait, i got her a great gift that everyone will like haha. I'm not sure why, but i have a feeling today is going to be a very special day. Well, i gotta go get ready for the party!
Bye!
~Nicole~"
6: 00 pm
I arrived at Jessie's alittle early to help her set up.
"By mom!" I waved at my mom as she drove out of the drive way. I walked up to the door and rang the doorbell.
"Coming!" Yelled Jessie, i waited for a while until she opened the door.
"Hey! Happy Birthday Jessie!" I told her, she smiled and hugged me saying,
"Thanks. Woah, is that my gift?!" She pointed at the box behind me. I looked at the box with her, i laugh as i said,"Yep, but no opening it until everyone else gets here." She pouted her lips and walked inside, waving for me to follow.
6:30 pm
"Well, i guess that's it." I said tying a balloon to her desk. She smiled and turned around, and looked around the room.
"I guess so." she smiled slightly then stared at me.
"You know, i never get to thank you for being a best friend, so, Thanks." She smiled and hugged me. I sighed and hugged her back, when the door bell rang.
"I guess their here!" She yelled and ran to the door, me following behind.
8: 00 pm
"PRESENTS TIME!" Jessie yelled down the hall. People came from the back yard and the kitchen into the living room and sat on the floor. One of our friends from school, Brittany, bursted out, "Oh! Open mine first!!" She pushed a small box infront of Jessie.
"OK... haha, thanks Brittany." Jessie said tearing off the wrapping paper. Inside the box was another box, and so on until it got to a very small box. Jessie picked it up and opened the last box. In side was a necklace with the word "Hope" engraved into it.
"Woah," Jessie said amazed, "it's beautiful. Thank you Brittany." She put it around her neck and everyone was complementing her.
8:30 pm
"Ok, last one," I said pushing my present infront of her, "hope you like it."
Jessie smiled and tore off the paper, inside was a box, she opened the box. A huge smile stretched across her face.
"SNOW CONE MAKER!" She pulled it out the box and quickly ran into the kitchen to plug it up.
"Everyone can have one to take home." SHe said from the kitchen. Everyone lined up to get some flavored ice. I stayed in the living room with Brittany. We were staying after to help Jessie clean up.
9: 00 pm
"Thank for helping guys." Jessie said bringing a garbage bag to the door.
"No problem." I said.
"Yea, we dont mind." Brittany added.
Jessie smiled then walked back to the couch and plopped down.
"Hey Jess--" I said, but then the lights went out. We heard a crash, something, or someone, was inside.
"Guys? Lets get outside and meet eachother." I heard, I thought it was Brittany, but i couldnt tell.
"Ok." Someone and I both said. We all tried to find our way to the door without being noticed. We all bumped into eachother at the door. Brittany let out a squeak, I quickly covered her mouth. Jessie opened the door, and we all went out side.
"Ok, lets just wait here, i'll call the police." Jessie said searching her pockets for her phone.
"Oh no! I left it inside!" She turned around and stared at the house, she couldn't see inside with the lights off.
"It's ok, lets just go next door." Brittany assured her.
We started walking when three men jumped from a bush. I saw them hit Brittany and Jessie in the head, knocking them unconsious. One started for me. I backed up, but ran into another behind me. They grabbed me and looked me over.
'What are they looking for? I didn't take anything did I?' I thought myself.
"Hmph, she's pretty enough for him." The one infront said.
"I guess, lets jut get her in the car." came from behind.
He grabbed my wrists and started pulling me towards a black limo, i turned around and yelled.
"Jessie! Brittany! WHat are you going to do with them!?" I yanked until i got my answer.
"Nothing, we just want you. They would have been in our way." He tightened his grip and opened the door. I looked into the car, the lights came on. The man laughed and tossed me in.
"Hello." Said a man on the other side of the limo. I felt a sharp pain in the back of my head, the last thing i remember was the door closing, and the car starting.
Everything went black. Where were we going? When would we get there? What will happen to me?
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Stay tuned for part 2. Either tomorrow, or Saturday.
Comments and Critiques Requested. Tell me what you think, and what i should add or remove. |
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