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Hi, my name is Garentina

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Falling Into Darkness {Part 1} }Transforming{

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By XxMelodyxX

Created: 2009-11-06 13:43:32

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Garentina walked down the hollowed path of the angel world. She stared at the swirling colors of the rainbow that colored the sky. "Hey, Garentina? What are you staring at?" a voice said while a hand was waving through Garentina's vision. She came back to reality, and looked before her, seeing Tuyen. "Oh, hi!" she shouted in her somewhat soft voice. Tuyen nodded, and patted her head. "Always so carefree." he sighed. Garentina smiled, and started to walk again.

After a few hours of walking and talking, Tuyen stopped, letting Garentina go on. She turned back, and gave him a puzzled look. "I have to go! See you around!" Tuyen shouted. Garentina nodded, and Tuyen started running back the other way. She sighed, and started to fly off.

She flew high above the rainbow-swirled sky, staring at all the other angels, waving at a few. One started to fly up to her, so she stopped. It was Nessie, one of her not-so-good friends. "Hey, you know that flying hours are up? You gotta land, now." she said, pointing at the large clock, which read 5: 00 PM. Garentina sighed, and let herself fall to the ground. She had a cold feeling going down, though.

That night, she had the exact same feeling, like when a ghost goes through you, a cold chill. She curled her small wings around her chest for warmth. She took in the vanilla scent they put off, making her tired. She soon closed her eyes, and fell asleep. Yet, she didn't sleep very long. She shot up, panting and crying.

Tuyen stepped up to Garentina the next morning. "So, how did ya' sleep?" Tuyen said in a very low, yet cute voice. Garentina sighed, but she was holding back a smirk. "I didn't sleep so well." she said, her hidden smirk disappearing for good. "Awwww." Tuyen said, and he gave Garentina a hug. "Sucks to be you. I slept quite exellent!" he whispered in a seductive tone. Garentina glared at him. "You brat!" she shouted, chasing Tuyen as he ran off.

She finally lost Tuyen, and sighed. She stared at the clock, until it hit noon. She cheered as she flew up into the sky, along with some other angels. She flew freely through the sky, as beautiful as always. Soon, that changed. The sky turned a dark red, and a black portal could be seen. Angels stared at it, not willing to move. Garentina, on the other hand, was being sucked in.

Once, sucked in, her body felt as if it were on fire. She screamed in pain as she felt her back ripping apart. She had a stretching feeling on her head, and her butt was sore. "Why me?" she screamed as she felt more pain. She finally couldn't take it, and she eyes fluttered closed, a tear strolling down her cheek, and onto her dress.

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