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Blood thirsty

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By porterRocks Send DollMail
Created: 2008-10-05 23:28:37 All stories by porterRocks
It was any ordinary day becka and i took our normal walk through the woods,trees stretched out hovering over our heads.The burnt orange sun set over the sky starting to fade away into a dark chilly night,brown fall leaves crunched underneath our old sneakers.Becka and i had been best friends since first grade.I pulled back my long wavy hair that flew in my face,becka suggested that we go a different way this time, i on the other hand didnt think it was too good of an idea but i followed becka any ways along a slimmer,darker trail.The bright moon shined in the pitch black sky we started heading back when a dark shadow leaped in front of us making us freeze instantly."What was that?" asked Becka in a chattery voice,"i dont know..." i was cut off by a bone chilling shreik.Another shadow leaped in front of us but this time it froze about thirty yards away.We chrouched low beneath a bush hoping whatever it was it wouldnt see us.We could sort of make out what it was,it was almost human looking,but was disformed and very tall.It was carrying something in its mouth, it was a human.It ripped at it with its huge sharp rows of teeth,blood and organs flowing everywhere,bones crunched,my stomach crenched and a drop of sweat slid down like a bullet down my hot sticky face, i looked over at becka staring into her fearfilled eyes i could tell she felt the same way as i did at that time,she looked over at me she knew that if she said the smallest word that the thing would rip us apart too.I squeezed my eyes shut,hoping that everything was just a nightmare,i opened my eyes,it was real,all real i didnt know what to do...
  

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lizard_eye

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Posted On: October 20, 2008
ooh its really interesting and good! just use paragraphs and make more clear, besides that, i love it! plz read soma my stuff!
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